| 2006-06-10 15:18:17 |
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great man, write more 10/10 |
| 2006-06-11 19:58:55 |
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MAN U SICK PERV,IMA CALL THE POLICE ON U |
| 2006-06-12 01:39:36 |
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Its writen very well but then sorta sick |
| 2006-06-12 14:22:10 |
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I agree with above reader. Story would have been more thrilling if the daughter was a virgin and forced to fuck her father. This story, perhaps, need two endings. It actually had suspense into it because we didn't know if the father would have his way with the daughter.
AND, if the daughter had been forced, then in another chapter, she could have arranged for the mother to catch her father fucking her. Man, would that be revenge. (Maybe I'm the sick one.) |
| 2006-06-14 15:27:09 |
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look, if you wanted a nonsick story you're on the wrong site. this was amazing, best solo orgasm i've ever had! 10/10 |