| 2007-03-23 13:42:09 |
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If you are going to insult the writer of the story at least learn to spell Paedophile. |
| 2007-03-24 15:21:32 |
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Very well written, liked the imagery and the progression from one part to the next. |
| 2007-03-27 23:23:30 |
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im 15 and this makes me wish i had a daughter to fuck.... and by the way YOU READ THIS WHAT IF HE CAUGHT YOU READING THIS. would you let him fuck her then? |
| 2007-04-06 18:41:32 |
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Without a shadow of a doubt, the best story on here. No bad spelling or typo's - always makes it easier to read. Fantastic build-up, though I was a little disappointed that she had fucked before - kinda wasted daddy's efforts. That said, you got me to cum well before I reached the end and believe me, that NEVER happens! Usually I never reach the end because the story is so crap. 9/10 Wickedsin, I like your style ;-) |
| 2007-04-08 17:47:59 |
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When it was at the point where he was blackmailing I was a little worried. But once you found she had the same fantasies it was brilliant. |