| 2007-10-08 06:49:17 |
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very good very good l;olo |
| 2007-10-26 19:53:28 |
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that was sooo good. you are a very talented writer. the only thing i would say needs work is your dialogue. but everything else is perfection. |
| 2007-10-29 03:51:27 |
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I don't get it why anyone finds incest and paedophillia sexually attratractive you sickos are all going to burn in hell |
| 2007-10-30 10:14:48 |
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your story are making me cum on my underwear .
god story |
| 2007-11-19 22:16:31 |
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SPOILER WARNING
Please read this story before reading my comment.
Daddy has found out that Lynn wants to have sex with him for a 'long time'. Why didn't he then ask her if she really smoked marijuana or if she had merely put it there and messed with the TV so she would get caught and "punished" by Daddy.
That seems like a logical question that should have been asked. Otherwise a nice story. |