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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2008-04-09 13:52:57 | Tamika Pt.2 | your going to lose alot of readers by not continuing your stories.... |
2008-04-10 16:29:45 | Tamika Pt.2 | i agree with 4-9 i write amazing stories, but take to long for next installments. please hurry up with next chapters. |
2008-04-10 18:23:52 | Tamika Pt.2 | ****i meant you write amazing stories**** |
2006-11-16 06:00:57 | Immortal Desires | Your aggravating use of dozens upon dozens of ellipsis (the constant dot-dot-dot between words and/or sentences) just about ruined your story, An ellipsis should be used sparingly, Windsnake. That and your lengthy paragraphs gets you a 4/10 from me. I'm the Dick Slapper. |
2006-11-25 23:29:26 | Immortal Desires | this stinks |