| 2006-05-23 00:40:40 |
spring Break_(2)
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A sad concept, weak plot, bad spelling and grammar, and virtually no excitement whatsoever basically describes this story |
| 2006-05-23 11:45:44 |
spring Break_(2)
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Pretty good story ... good plot and very sexy! Not sure about the size thing but if it works for you !! :)Keep writing ... you can only get better! |
| 2006-06-03 16:03:10 |
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you people need to lay off on the spelling and grammer coments. Just read the story and if you don't like it to bad. move on. I thought this story was great. |
| 2006-06-12 16:17:44 |
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ok the guy who mashed this story on 5/23 is a duesh bag and should go fuck himself, this story was great, fuck spellin n gramar who gives a shit |
| 2006-06-13 18:44:50 |
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I gave it a 10 and it was better than that |