| 2004-09-09 00:47:14 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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that was absolutely horrifying. my God. you are seriously disturbed. I think im gonna have nightmares. But from one writer to another, you have a good way of showing detail, but try not to be so damn scary next time. damn. |
| 2004-09-18 02:35:01 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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"guts...guts...guts...guts.... if i had 10 bucks for every bloody time u say the word guts, id have enough money to buy a shotgun and shoot the guts out of your vagina. apparantly thats where yours reside, eh wot? the sheriff i right in some areas, such as u being a slut. you could have at least told him u were blackmailed and raped, ya priss. its as if u wanted it to happen. oh wait, sorry, i forgot. U DID! bloody hell youve got problems. "i dont feel like dogs anymore" oh so now you're too good for animals. hangon, im gonna go sodomize my cat now. nevermind, ill go infiltrate the confines of that broad's pants. taking steps to learn your lessons, thats for bloody sure. thats it. Piss off! |
| 2004-10-10 01:31:42 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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ok man first story was a masterpiece a truely good story. but dude this is wrong the girl is getting fucked by literally every male that sees her. u need to slow it down a bit. put in some action or something good. other then that good work and try to make other stories not so brutual. |
| 2004-10-14 03:31:13 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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I LOVED IT!! GOOD JOB!!! BUT GOD DAMN YOUR VAGINA MUST BE LOOSE!!! NOT TO MENTION YOUR ASS! |
| 2004-10-14 15:07:05 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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This shit is sick who gets off on someone being raped by there father. If that shit turns you on you are a sick fuck. |