| 2006-05-15 11:51:40 |
English Fantasy, Fufilled
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it was allright, but there needs to be more excitement |
| 2006-05-17 07:09:07 |
English Fantasy, Fufilled
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Outstanding Story. I give it a 10/10..It would seem that Natalie had wanted you for some time..I also presume that you were of age by now, right? Have you continued to see her after you graduated? Tell us more! |
| 2006-05-18 17:35:26 |
English Fantasy, Fufilled
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it was ok but needs more diolog |
| 2006-05-28 08:45:27 |
English Fantasy, Fufilled
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how would she be a virgin tho? makes it weird... |
| 2006-05-29 22:57:46 |
English Fantasy, Fufilled
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yea good story............... lack of them lately good plot, good thought, virgin tho?? 9/10 but 1/10 for laughs like the other guy |