| 2006-04-10 13:48:53 |
adventures of a freak
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Your story SUCKS, you SUCK and you shouldn't attemp to write another story. Next time let the person you're talking about write the story or take English101over again for the 3rd time. |
| 2006-05-12 22:21:50 |
adventures of a freak
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i like it |
| 2006-09-08 23:28:37 |
adventures of a freak
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the story was o.k., but you need to learn how to spell. |
| 2006-09-29 21:50:42 |
adventures of a freak
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Great fucking story....ignore these losers cause the only woman they'd ever get to plam is Rosie Palms |
| 2006-04-10 09:14:31 |
My neighbor and me
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It was decent. Needs a little proofreading, but the story itself is sound. 8/10 |