| 2006-05-20 00:33:12 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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you duchy fucking bastard dont you have respect for weman its guys like you who give good guys bad names if i ever see you on the streets i will beat the fuck out of you. |
| 2006-05-22 17:41:39 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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m'kay? the first one made me wet.. this one just made me worried.. i hope you don't live in Kentucky.. and you write really good and very descriptive but its just freaky shit you write about like for example instead of an old guy and his son fucking her it should be like to hot football players lol.. anyways keep writing. |
| 2006-05-23 19:30:51 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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yes im fucking wetter than hell |
| 2006-05-23 21:53:09 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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The first story was really hot. I could really feel the dog sex . . . you little pervert :-). But, here's what I think is wrong with this chapter: why does your character have to be involved in rape fantasies all the time? Rape is about control, and it's terrifying. Would you write about snuffing in such glowing terms? imo it was better when your character had some control. |
| 2006-06-12 12:16:33 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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You are a sick, sick person...actually person is too nice of a name for you! You must hate yourself a lot to make us this kind of crap. |