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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-05-24 19:04:11 | Goldie and the Seven Hells: Hell 1 (Lust) | How could blues eyes be seen in the dark unless it's alien? Good job with the stalking part. Rewrite the opening paragraph, but keep the name eyes. a stalker called eyes is perfect. your story is sick and shocking -- the way good writing should be. if it doesn't withdraw an emotioal response from the reader, it needs to be edited. take all negative comments as compliments that you're doing it right. good job. the best posting i've read. |
| 2006-04-18 20:48:04 | My dark fantasy | even though,it's,not true => you smiled,at,what just happened,to you.....you are ~> ONE,SCREWED UP,BITCH & DESERVED IT............................ |
| 2006-04-19 08:19:39 | My dark fantasy | Why is this rape? I want my money back - Iv'e wasted 5 minutes of my time reading this rubbish! |
| 2006-08-24 14:22:36 | My dark fantasy | you are a warped, bent bitch, eh? i'd cock-slab the shit outta you. telling such s filthy story, you should be tied up and flogged! berating you and probing you with the anger this story made me feel at your complete depravity. - excellent- write more -blade- |
| 2006-05-16 05:59:43 | Melissa does UAE | The syntax is awkward enough that I believe you're Filipino. If English is your second language, this is really quite good. The scenario is interesting, and even plausible. Maybe the husband and wife will find out what else they have in common and stay together for more bisexual fun. I loved all of the lead-up to the sex; it made the whole story better to read. Thank you for the good first effort. =dreamer= |