2007-04-02 14:17:41 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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there wasnt any bestiality thogh, so u should check ure desacriptions |
2007-04-27 20:05:35 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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i am 11 years old and i got a lot of good and ture storys like when and my dad was fucking ever sncie i was 5 |
2007-05-03 08:36:11 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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FOR SPARTA!!!!! oh who saw that movie with richard gear.. Oh and storey i mark it "F" |
2007-05-29 15:59:07 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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I'm curious.....Are the only people that comment on all of these stories illiterate, or just stupid? Great story line, if a little rushed, and a little repetative with some of the slang names for a vagina. 9/10! |
2007-06-08 21:55:13 |
Farm Girl - part 2
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Dark Dreamer, don't stop. The story line was very good, I think it would have been a little better had you been even more descriptive, It might help to write your stories in a number of settings, each time reading what you have already written and make improvements where you see the need. |