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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-04-13 12:12:52 | Spring Break 2 | Like I said before I wish you were my sis, we be fucking every chance we get!!! write more please I love toread stories like this specialy eating pussy I love eating PUSSY !!! |
2006-04-14 01:59:50 | Spring Break 2 | 1) It's spelled "orgasm" 2) Boring! not the worst, but definitely far from the best 3) Line breaks and capital letters make any story easier to read. This is definitely a good start. I hope that future stories are a little more carefully crafted. |
2006-04-15 21:53:52 | Spring Break 2 | I loved the first one, I love this one! Excellent! |
2006-04-16 15:38:33 | Spring Break 2 | to long |
2006-04-16 19:23:12 | Spring Break 2 | Excellent stories, could have done with slightly improved grammar though, even so still a exciting to read, keep up the good writing, more please!!!!! |