| 2006-09-22 19:40:57 |
A Brother's Best Friend
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the sex scene is like last and all of the first part is shit |
| 2008-02-16 23:00:39 |
A Brother's Best Friend
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I hate people who dis others for what they think is "poor writing." I loved the story. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. I'm sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts... Keep up your writing because you have better grammar than most people on here. |
| 2006-04-14 18:16:46 |
Working up the nerve...
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Please post and let me know what you think. Thanks! |
| 2006-04-15 08:07:21 |
Working up the nerve...
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HOT HOT HOT is all i can say it was really hot story |
| 2006-04-15 09:16:49 |
Working up the nerve...
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one great story! love it! |