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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-04-16 09:57:10 | Jan & family | No crappy comments from me. It moved along really well. The 'guided tour' part bogged down a little.I think it would be a hoot if you took it over the top with lighting and sound booms and everything, kind of like boogie nights. Keep writing. |
| 2006-04-16 14:58:54 | Jan & family | make him fuck the pregnant one |
| 2006-04-16 19:09:08 | Jan & family | very well written, i liked it! |
| 2006-04-17 02:17:13 | Jan & family | FUCKING WRITE ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!!!! TEN OUT OF FUCKING TEN, BITCH!!!!!! |
| 2006-04-17 18:45:03 | Jan & family | that was some hot action write part two soon i want to see what going to happen next......9/10 |