| 2004-06-17 14:21:49 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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Very poor. Your first one was the best, but still not good. Your stories are too long, they jump around too much, and some parts have no relivence at all. |
| 2004-06-19 02:30:42 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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well this was one shitty story. you jumped from the story in the title to some other shit, and i lot of stuff was mispelled and such. this part of the story sucks balls. |
| 2004-06-20 00:06:37 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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u suck author u peice of fucking shit u suck u here me u suck |
| 2004-06-22 12:05:24 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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1st any body who liked this story are you 4 real??!!!2nd you should be banned from writing stories (Farmgirl my ass) 3rd you need to be put in a crazy house ya mental shit head!!! |
| 2004-07-06 13:58:23 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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now it got sick - no good |