| 2007-11-09 09:24:31 |
Share and share alike part 2
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You were told that part 1 was weak... this is total crap.. don't waste any more time, you can't write! |
| 2006-05-09 08:34:48 |
My bold and beautiful aunt, part 1
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great but describe the aunt in detail |
| 2006-05-09 12:33:04 |
My bold and beautiful aunt, part 1
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A WONDERFUL START, IT LEFT ME WANTING MORE |
| 2006-05-09 13:19:50 |
My bold and beautiful aunt, part 1
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AWESOME AND ADD MORE VOYEURISM |
| 2006-05-09 21:11:43 |
My bold and beautiful aunt, part 1
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Loved the story. Keep it going. It ought to be good for 3 or 4 parts. 8/10 |