| 2007-05-31 19:34:42 |
Beast_(0)
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it would suck less if you could learn how to spell, and use grammer correctly |
| 2007-09-09 18:13:13 |
Beast_(0)
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shit n a total rip off! |
| 2007-09-22 20:34:39 |
Beast_(0)
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Not a bad story, just use a spell checker next time. And, for all those below complaining about the "grammer", it's GRAMMAR. 7/10. |
| 2007-10-25 00:41:30 |
Beast_(0)
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You guys need to just leave girl alone with the spelling and grammar shit!!!! this site is not about spelling and grammar, its about the stories!!!! just fucking dropit already!!!! i gave her a 10/10 on all her stories!!!! girl keeping doing ur thang and u should write a book and put all your stories in it and sell it. you would definantly make a lot of money off of it. |
| 2007-11-17 13:29:59 |
Beast_(0)
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in fairness, spelling and grammar does matter. i gave up reading that in the first two paragraphs because it was difficult to understand. |