| 2007-06-19 13:09:43 |
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This was interesting and well written. I'm not sure of the connection to the other parts of the story, though.
I wish I had a daughter to train...
Greg S |
| 2007-09-25 05:42:16 |
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I have never been one for using a child but i wish my father would have :) |
| 2008-02-01 21:51:26 |
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i wish my dad would use me like that... |
| 2006-04-20 14:11:18 |
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Um, I'm rather lost for words, after a string of utterly wonderful stories, it finishes off in such a hurried and rushed way that its a total letdown from the buildup of previous episodes. The ending in particular just made me go wtf? |
| 2006-04-20 20:23:45 |
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Ditto. Good hot story, had me where I wanted to be, then you dropped me like a hot potato; wtf?
rud and disapointed |