| 2004-03-30 13:54:15 |
The Hitch-hiker_(1)
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that was good but too short. try making it a longer story next time. |
| 2004-04-14 23:34:03 |
The Hitch-hiker_(1)
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pretty good i give it a 7/10 good detail but could use alil more keep up the good job and write more like a part 2 to this 1 alil longer and better :) |
| 2004-09-01 09:35:18 |
Midnight Attack_(0)
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ppl at least post a good comment for thid guys hard work? |
| 2004-09-01 09:35:18 |
Midnight Attack_(1)
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ppl at least post a good comment for thid guys hard work? |
| 2004-03-13 23:09:31 |
Strip Poker_(0)
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was good but way to short |