| 2005-07-05 00:28:19 |
Farm Girl - part 3
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okay this was some REALLY weird shit !!!! i mean i like the first two but damn this just got ...... unnaturally ... if i may say , stupid !!!! this would not happen in a NORMAL life , wow kid , i must admit at times it got really hott but in other times , i jut kinda CRiNGED in pain . dude wat happened they were going oh so good ( still are ) but u need to proof read this frist , casue it was the mom pinning her down then some thing bout an officer ,weird .........anyways i still say ur an amazing writer just take the time to make it a lil more beileveable !!!!!!!!!!!! |