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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-09 01:23:05 | Lesson 1 | OMFG u should definetly write more. can i pls be ur next target caus i love shemales. |
| 2007-04-15 13:48:30 | Lesson 1 | I loved this story! Yes, Write more! |
| 2007-04-24 06:23:20 | Lesson 1 | hmmm... alright story, thou the idea of making someone understand that way would actualy just foster more hate. Its been proven, leads the man to either suicide, or homocide, wich doesnt get the point across. Best bet is just teach your kids to be accepting but dont force em to be something there not, be it strait or gay or bi, let them decide. - my 2 cents - UnknownWriter |
| 2007-05-03 03:37:14 | Lesson 1 | THe last part could've been left out as it gives a since of a weak ending.Other than that it was an awesome story. U should definetly write more!!! |
| 2007-05-10 06:48:39 | Lesson 1 | twas an awsome story, got a bit repetitive though, u should spend more time emphasising the juicier parts so it doesnt all just flow along with everything the same... one after the other.. the end bit could be though over too, no that i didnt love it!! but a more desired affect could have been achieved by him maybe becoming a fifth 'special friend'... please write more!! |