| 2006-04-30 07:57:41 |
My Daughter the Porn Star
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GOD: Holy crap. 10/10. Nice Plot, you made everything fit in nicely nothing rushed. people you want to make a story follow this one as an example. I make one, but eh. love this. make more! |
| 2006-04-30 18:21:28 |
My Daughter the Porn Star
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This was one of the best stories I have read. Great job!! Keep on writing |
| 2006-05-01 01:41:59 |
My Daughter the Porn Star
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good |
| 2006-05-01 20:29:13 |
My Daughter the Porn Star
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Very nice. we all liked it Now write one that just shocks us out of our pants... oh, after reading it i'm already out of my pants!!!!!! |
| 2006-05-02 18:48:17 |
My Daughter the Porn Star
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very good |