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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-20 15:57:16 | Her Last Breath | Why would I do that when I can spend the next month or so mind-fucking "Reader." That sounds so much more interesting! Keep your friends close and your enemies even closer. I would like to thank you. Look at the attention you've created. Even in hating my story, you've become my biggest fan. Want me to mail you a free banner "I Love WickedSin"??????? |
| 2006-08-20 21:53:20 | Her Last Breath | WS, is she actually trying to take some sort of credit for your success? Unbelievable. If you know who this wingnut is, PM me. I will not disclose it, I am just dying to see what kind of third rate slap and tickle stories she has written. She does not seem to have even grasped the reason so many writers at this site have come to your defence. You went out on a limb, you wrote something that was definately beyond your paradigm, you did a fine job of crafting a believable, detailed, well composed story. You went above and beyond the call of duty in forwarning readers about the content. Then 'reader' comes along and not only flames you, but makes it personal. This is an affront to the very spirit of the site. Every genuine consciencous author at this site is solidly in your corner. |
| 2006-08-21 00:02:49 | Her Last Breath | Archaic, The rest of us on here must be the one's who don't know what we're talking about. "Reader" is the obvious “expert” on this site although "Reader" is so unsure of his/her own beliefs, he/she won't attach an identity to his/her comments. Where I come from, that spells cowardice. I'd like to challenge "reader" to show me specifically where my story lacks technical accuracy. I really wonder how much knowledge and actual experience he/she has with murders, crime scenes, sex crimes. But wait, finding something on the internet in "an hour of research" qualifies him/her as an expert according to "reader." Wanna know the ironic thing. I left a significant amount of detail out of the story out of respect for those who have actually met their fate at the hands of evil as detailed in |
| 2006-08-21 00:22:29 | Her Last Breath | **read entry below first..this is part 2....** my story. Most people who have never experienced death could not stomach the true brutality. So here I am, being criticized for not doing my research when in actuality, I toned it down on purpose. I wonder if he/she REALLY wants me to be technically accurate? I’m sure I would then be criticized for being so honestly descriptive and brutal. How much you wanna bet, “reader” is the kind of person who would win a million dollars and bitch about it because his/her winnings were in 20 dollar bills. Anyway...thank you and all those for the support. WickedSin~ |
| 2006-08-21 13:30:23 | Her Last Breath | Regarding your technical accuracy query, I am talking about death spasm, specifically the action of particular muscles reacting to violent death which your perpetrator could not fail to miss. Instead we get the weak (in context) “Lindsay saw a bright flash of light for an instant and then….Lindsay ceased to exist.” That detail would not have made your story any more violent but it would help account for the perpetrators mentality. I did not profess to be expert, that’s a pedestal you placed me on. As for winning $1million, I don’t need it. Toning down the story in deference to those that have been there does not wash, if your concern was really for victims you would not have written it in the first place. I’m done here now that you are spouting excuses. Bye. |