| 2007-06-29 18:58:18 |
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oh my! i was convinced to read this story by a guy in my psycology class. More specifically, to read the comments. I did read the story first as to fully understand the crap on the comment board. And as a 22 yr. old female, i have to say that i was intrigued by this story while at the same time deeply disturbed. However, i have to wonder why everyone leaving comments types eloquently their views but still sound like idiots? Am i not mistaken that this argument was about the content of the story and then progressed to a history lesson and then to bashing the great U.S.A.!! i am English and living in America and both places have their strengths and also their shortcomings, but is it really necessary to be so childish in your rantings? Keep the banter to the subject at hand good story!! |
| 2007-07-04 17:05:07 |
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Man, I miss her WS. It sure has gotten quiet since she left. Two doctorates, I nearly fell out of my seat . . . |
| 2007-07-11 20:38:00 |
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Good story. It was very well written. Kept my attention through the story and not a distint typo in the whole thing. I must point out though.... this story has the most intilectual comments I have ever seen for a story on this site. |
| 2007-07-26 04:37:01 |
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like some commenters, this story was not my usual style. i jumped in and read it out of curiosity and found it was quite well written. i enjoy some of your other stories like 'The Violation of rachel' and would like to see more along that line. 9/10 |
| 2007-08-19 18:06:11 |
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While it seems most of the excitement on this board has long since calmed down, I thought I'd throw my thoughts in anyway. I can't believe that a comment was made about women not looking at stuff like this. I am a middle class, well educated woman. I purposely looked up rape erotica on this site. And I purposely read this story, even after seeing the warning. Silly boys...girls like sex too... |