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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-04-27 06:30:08 | Bailing Shellie Out of Jail | Well wickensin, you write a hot story!! By all meens continue with part 2 Doc. 10/10 |
2006-04-27 20:13:59 | Bailing Shellie Out of Jail | Thanks doc! |
2006-05-02 03:08:40 | Bailing Shellie Out of Jail | Diddo!!!! Good stuff |
2006-05-10 18:25:01 | Bailing Shellie Out of Jail | Your storie brings back my memories of my daughter's sexual lessons |
2006-05-28 17:51:22 | Bailing Shellie Out of Jail | Very good. One problem with first person narrative, though: if the narrator wasn't at the scene, how could he write about it? your story line is so good, though, that i was able (for the first time) to accept that. i read a published book with that same problem, and it wasn't near as hot as your story. good job. |