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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-04-25 20:07:51 | Kyle and Kat | crap needs more details |
2006-04-25 22:54:52 | Kyle and Kat | work on it... more details.. less gramatical errors.. sure its a sex story.. but noone wants confusing literature... |
2006-04-28 02:39:20 | Kyle and Kat | I'll work on more details with word and edit those in. Will post again after I do so. |
2008-02-09 14:41:19 | Kyle and Kat | There was lots of unnecessary detail throughout the whole story so it was quite disappointing to get to the sex and have barely any detail what so ever. Lots of room for improvement, but good first attempt. |
2006-06-28 16:54:31 | The story of Sarah | i loved it. i give it a 10. tons of details. i wish i had a man to love me like that |