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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-04-26 19:16:48 | a change in lucy | well, I only got a few things to say first of fantastic story, great sence of realism just work on your spelling, cuz its kinda hard 2 read oh yeah, as a personal opinion i think it has a bit 2much dialog other than that, it'sGREAT!... I say, go for a sequil |
| 2006-04-27 00:05:14 | a change in lucy | part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 |
| 2006-04-27 12:37:00 | a change in lucy | I thought the spelling and vocabulary in this story were much better than the other stories on this site. Keep up the good work. |
| 2006-04-27 20:22:04 | a change in lucy | Great story! |
| 2006-04-28 00:56:04 | a change in lucy | This story is amazing. The grammer needs to be worked on a little bit but overall it is great. the dialog is perfect, really draws you in. What i like especially is that you space your paragraphs out unlike most of the other stories on this site. All there other stories are just huge blobs of writing all put into one page. This story was once again amazing. I will be looking for part 2. 10/10 |