| 2006-04-30 20:53:55 |
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Plump is nice, but size 24 means folds, not curves. |
| 2006-05-01 18:51:58 |
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I love plump women. had my share of them over the years and some of them were red-hot. They loved to fuck and enjoyed taking care of their man. God bless the big girls. |
| 2006-05-25 16:49:02 |
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"she is defiantly a plus size because of her 24 dress size", lame writing. "I had made my wife hornier then a bitch. She was on fire and nothing could put that fire out except an orgasm with my huge cock stuffed deep inside her. She couldn’t wait to get back to the cabin. She needed it now." You had this same problem with the last story I read. How do you know she was horny? Did she tell you or are you a mind reader? Here, again, "She wanted to make me come", how do you know that? you can't write other people's thoughts and feelings in first-person narrative. you can only write their actions and words. do you know what your wife is thinking in real life? "She felt guilty cumming again", here again, same problem (also it's lame writing). Try writing in third person. |
| 2006-06-12 19:24:37 |
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ashley barbie is a asshole, it was a good story and who cares about first or second person... she sounds like she just needs a good fuck herself |
| 2006-07-04 03:32:02 |
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A plus woman, size 24, would usually require some talcum powder. The powder uncovers the wet spot so you know where to put your dick! |