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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-05-02 16:25:12 | Raping Mia | u sick fuck prolly the worse story i have ever read.... dont get me wrong i know what fiction means but i also know what total bullshit is and when u said that u were fucking her asshole and then all of a sudden she was liking it is exactly that total bullshit... i gave u a 4 n that was bc i accidently hit the 4 instead of the 1... Ur career should stop here...i think it has |
| 2006-05-02 17:32:58 | Raping Mia | Justaguy put the preamble up top so he wouldnt get horrible comments from people like you. great story plot by the way keep up the good work! |
| 2006-05-03 01:42:09 | Raping Mia | some of you guys are hilarious! 2 of you made references to my "career." what fuckin career? no one's paying me, "pal" I'm doing this for fun and to have a creative outlet. as far as my preamble sounding angry, you're mistaking bluntness with anger...I've read many stories that had some readers defending the story/writer to dimwits who didn't like the genre of the story they'd just voluntarily read; I figured I would defend myself instead of having the readers do it. here's a thought; those of you who don't like a story you've read would do the rest of us a great service if you'd direct us to some great story you've created. or you could just kiss my ass...and just to be clear, that was more bluntness not anger. thanks to those that have compimented this; more stories are in the works |
| 2006-05-03 05:18:36 | Raping Mia | i love this i wanna fuck ur daughtere plez mail me on tumbin_rrr |
| 2006-05-04 12:24:32 | Raping Mia | So I get to be the first with the balls (or clit) to make a contribution without anonymity. A copy editor would help you with the flow etc. of your stories, and then ensure continuity through a plan of events if you want this to develop into a serial. I would add young, virginity, violence, revenge, and consensual, For a preamble I would say: xnxx stories have a category system both for your reading safety and enjoyment. If you don't feel safe reading stories featuring these categories then stop reading now. If you read any further, it is at your risk if you dislike the story, unless you have something constructive to say. Anonymous critics need not write anything. Part 3: Settle into a consensual routine. Or start another story from scratch using categories and events to plan the series, |