| 2006-05-04 00:50:15 |
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one big paragraph, but it was a great story |
| 2006-05-04 14:27:46 |
Spring Break 3
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be sure and write a part 4 and have your mother in it with your sister and her friend |
| 2006-05-04 23:29:58 |
Spring Break 3
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A really hot story but really tough to read. You are getting better though, aI am a sucker for a facial. The first two stories were not as good as this one. try writing the story in word and copy paste it here, that way the sentence and parafraph breaks will be preserved. |
| 2006-05-05 01:26:11 |
Spring Break 3
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who gives a shit about the english, the story was fucking great! |
| 2006-05-05 05:33:47 |
Spring Break 3
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Um, so he started screwing mom about a year before the sister was born? Is there a surprise coming up in part 4? |