| 2004-03-11 12:31:32 |
The Dog
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very poor effort but much luck to your next try |
| 2004-03-23 06:44:31 |
The Dog
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I have to agree to short and needs more detail. |
| 2004-03-27 11:49:32 |
The Dog
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It has all the ingredients of being an excellant story.Let's hope that the author can put pen to paper,so to speak,and make it happen.;) |
| 2004-04-18 06:08:03 |
The Dog
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good, and coming from me that means Great! just make it longer |
| 2004-04-28 10:42:05 |
The Dog
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i agree the story was to short, AND SHITHEAD.....WHY DO YOU COME AND READ THIS STUFF IF YOU DONT LIKE IT? maybe you need to feel a dogs cock in your ass. |