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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-10-23 15:14:11 | The Darker Side of Love | don't know what they are talkin gabout... it sucks |
| 2005-01-25 21:30:06 | The Darker Side of Love | Lilly, This was a nice poem. And a nice start. Though, it feels you are holding back. Hiding passion. Ashamed of it maybe? Afraid of it? I would suggest you look deeper into the psyche of your sub side and feel the passion through before writing another word. Imagine your matster standing in front of you, but then turning his back on her. Pull up all of the feelings that situation dredges up. The express nothing less that what bubbles up. Remember, your master may read this. Do you owe him a hidden passion? Or all of who you are? This poem is a good start though! |
| 2006-05-29 12:19:03 | The Darker Side of Love | very emotional, well done. A person can empathize with her |
| 2008-01-15 12:55:27 | The Darker Side of Love | ooo yes |
| 2004-02-20 17:27:18 | Desire_(0) | That was so romanticaly sexy that I had to send it to my guy. WOW!!!! |