| 2006-07-04 07:52:35 |
Fine but not Fine. just ahead in our line
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story line was good but the grammer is bad, bad, bad!!! |
| 2006-07-04 08:01:21 |
Fine but not Fine. just ahead in our line
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Missed rape out of the scenerio.! Spelling and grammar poor and the story not much better |
| 2006-07-04 08:14:02 |
Fine but not Fine. just ahead in our line
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learn to write and brutal sex is not cool. try a different approach. |
| 2006-07-04 12:16:16 |
Fine but not Fine. just ahead in our line
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Geez! It seems 95 percent of writers under 25 do not know how to spell, use sentences, or use paragraphs. IM has ruined these people. Nobody cares about the story when it is unreadable. |
| 2006-07-05 06:21:23 |
Fine but not Fine. just ahead in our line
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if dat is true ur a fuking sad kunt |