| 2006-07-12 14:34:51 |
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oh yes i thought it was hot .. good job .. i look forward to more .. damn wish i was that chic . hot hot hot |
| 2006-07-12 21:19:42 |
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Please please please!! Break up your story onto readable paragraphs! It doesn't take much, and makes a lot easier to read! |
| 2006-07-13 02:42:53 |
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paragraphs would be nice, but the bold text made my eyes start to water |
| 2006-07-14 14:56:51 |
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Hey sorry about the paragraphs it was 4:30 am and I was up for 3 days when I wrote it |
| 2007-04-15 21:36:43 |
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keep righting 10 of 10 mooore please |