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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-12 02:32:05 | The Runaway Club- Chapter 1 | a virgin thats not tight? kinda dumb observation,huh?will be better in chapter 2 i'm sure & spell check 8/10 |
| 2006-12-02 20:09:36 | The Runaway Club- Chapter 1 | RIGHT MORE |
| 2007-04-14 19:39:38 | The Runaway Club- Chapter 1 | You wanted us to be brutally honest but couldn't even spell it. Okay, use a spell checker, proof read your work a day after you write it and correct everything. Read every single word too. The wrong word can be spelled correctly. In part 2 you underlined everything...don't. Appa... your readers can not understand a 74yo woman talking about her past 60 years ago being today and having Internet. Maybe your readers need to be told if you jump back...oh yes you did...then you need smarter readers. |
| 2006-07-11 06:08:19 | … and they want me to baby-sit! | that was hella hott.... |
| 2006-07-11 14:06:05 | … and they want me to baby-sit! | so very -very sexy how about ch 2 |