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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-22 12:30:11 | Nicole and I | awsome |
| 2006-07-11 08:24:19 | my favorite school day | sucks... ass. take some writing lessons... not developed enough. |
| 2006-07-11 11:51:28 | my favorite school day | great story idea but no details or base in the story take your time and use alot of details making the story longer. |
| 2006-07-12 01:09:15 | my favorite school day | Are you even literate? |
| 2006-07-12 03:53:53 | my favorite school day | I'd slap you if I could. You're lacking punctuation, grammar, plot, details, reality, and build-up. Take a class or something |