| 2007-01-19 01:20:17 |
My Sister Eve
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Eve sounds nice but you couldn't believe Simonif u wanted to. No man can come that many times. i know its fiction and its a great read but.. twice, maybe three.. but he'd need a break if he wanted to come that third time in 1 or 2 hours |
| 2007-01-30 14:30:39 |
My Sister Eve
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Wicked Loved The Story And I Can Cumm Three Times In A Hour Not Hard Just Need Stamina 10/10 |
| 2007-02-26 02:40:49 |
My Sister Eve
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sweet man, I got to say its good 10/10 |
| 2007-03-05 13:13:24 |
My Sister Eve
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I can cum 4 times in an hour it's really not that hard when you have stamina |
| 2007-03-27 04:42:05 |
My Sister Eve
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Hi first I loved the story. The sister thing is just such a great fantasy. Finding no extra strings sex with someone your close to but no commitments and available when ever you both can plus a little taboo thrown in. What could be better? Just one constructive criticism. Try not to repeat words/phrases a lot. find other ways to describe for example: you used downy a few times mix it up with other words each time like: cottony, downy, satin, satiny, silken, silky, velvety. It’s the variety (at least for me) of words that can make the difference. |