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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-16 01:02:11 | Clark and Jens Sexual Conquests | Great start to what I hope will be a hot and very nasty series. |
| 2006-07-16 02:31:41 | Clark and Jens Sexual Conquests | It was okay. Detail more and itll be really kickass. 8/10 |
| 2006-07-16 08:33:24 | Clark and Jens Sexual Conquests | nice premise! i would have done it differently than bogus blackmail, especially the way it unfolded, blackmail doesn't add to this story. But your story has some originality which is rare here. your writing was fine, but can i suggest you break it up into some more paragraphs to make it easier to read? perhaps start a paragraph when you are starting a quote...i think that format is easier to follow. congrats on a good story. -blade- |
| 2007-03-14 11:54:59 | Clark and Jens Sexual Conquests | molti mari e fiumi Attraverserò dentro la tua terra mi ritroverai turbini e tempeste io cavalcherò volerò tra i fulmini per averti meravigliosa creatura...10/10zsdzzzzzzzz... |
| 2006-07-15 07:54:14 | Kidnapped Sex Slaves_(1) | why end now, please finish it soon, especialy the anal parts, |