| 2006-07-23 14:31:12 |
Megan and Cindy - Part 1
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16-year old girls, living on a farm, know a hell of a lot more about sex than what the writer knows about writing. The plot is great but the writing shows much inexperience. But then again, I couldn't do any better. |
| 2006-07-23 20:36:14 |
Megan and Cindy - Part 1
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that was an awesome story...my pussy is throbbing and dripping!!! Hope to read more of yours!!! |
| 2006-07-23 22:43:01 |
Megan and Cindy - Part 1
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unrealistic, but I like it. If you want to make it really good, write a story where the girl is 30 and abruptly discovers it feels good when she touches herself. LOL |
| 2006-07-25 09:52:01 |
Megan and Cindy - Part 1
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Oh ... fuck my pussy! |
| 2006-07-26 00:43:06 |
Megan and Cindy - Part 1
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Great. Dont listen to the dickheads above. keep up the good work. |