| 2006-10-08 09:52:02 |
Ceremony
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one of the best i've read on this site.who gives a shit about technical stuff.did they understand the language too?keep up the good work & write more stories.10/10 |
| 2006-10-12 04:33:23 |
Ceremony
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Good imagination - too much at start - too much at end - multiple fucking in one story gets repetitive but u did your best. |
| 2006-10-12 20:26:57 |
Ceremony
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I would have to say, that other than a few spelling errors, this was one of the better stories I have read here. I really doubt if I could have done better myself. Very well done and very hot. 10/10 |
| 2006-10-15 20:00:33 |
Ceremony
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WOW. 12/10 |
| 2006-10-23 18:47:27 |
Ceremony
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Brilliant story, was a little hesistant about the sexuality of a tribe but you described them perfectly. Amazing job. |