| 2005-10-14 08:14:40 |
Baby Island
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i liked the storyline i think you should make a part deux m/ it had a great build up why is everyone coming here to jack off haha i just like to read them if they turn me on ill do the dew haha later make part two later |
| 2005-12-08 06:33:56 |
Baby Island
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IS THIS REALLY TRUE?, IT HAD GREAT BUILD UP AND LIKE THE OTHER COMMENTS I HOPE THERE IS A SECOND CHAPTER. U SHOW SOME TALENT. THE TWIN IDEA WAS GREAT. BUT I JUST CANT BELEAVE IT AS TRUE. BUT IT MAKES ME WISH I WAS STRANDED WITH TWIN SISTERS,MINE OR ANY OTHERS. AND ALL THE ASSCLOWNS GIVING U SHIT JUST WANT SOMETHING TO BEAT OFF TO SO FUCK THEM. ITS NOT WASTED WHEN U RELEASE ARTISTIC ABILITY I GIVE IT A 8/10 |
| 2005-12-31 00:27:33 |
Baby Island
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yea that was pretty pathetic. there is NO WAY IN HELL u jumped off a boat..no a SHIP & swam to a fucking island. & if it is true too bad a shark didnt gobble u up so that i wouldnt have just wasted time reading that "story"! |
| 2006-03-22 01:40:04 |
Baby Island
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Where's rest of the story.... come on, give us more of the story line. |
| 2006-08-12 07:06:35 |
Baby Island
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what is your damage |