| 2006-07-22 22:18:36 |
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very good would it look like that i love it. the suspence is killing me hurry up with the next chapter. please dont tell me that is it.because im hanging here. is he across the valley or the field.10/10 |
| 2006-07-23 00:04:46 |
End of the world - Chapter 7
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good story! shoulda had one of the brothers trail with a rifle just in case (and then blow the a-hole's head off), but its all good. |
| 2006-07-23 02:00:15 |
End of the world - Chapter 7
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u need to make this into a book its fucking great as someelse said u have redefined 10/10 for me also......cant wait for number 8 keep up the awsome work |
| 2006-07-23 02:29:46 |
End of the world - Chapter 7
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When is the next part cumming? |
| 2006-07-23 03:24:09 |
End of the world - Chapter 7
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man let us know when ch 8 is comming...and everyone on here loves your stories so there is no need in waiting to see what the comments say about the stories because they are all great..so keep them comming as quick as u can |