| 2006-07-24 02:48:36 |
my classmate !!!
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I hope the same happens to me. improve your English. good |
| 2006-07-25 17:59:04 |
my classmate !!!
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can i know my mistakes ? |
| 2006-09-14 00:12:34 |
my classmate !!!
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YOUR USE OF ENGLISH FOR SOMEONE WHO DOES NOT HAVE IT FOR A NATIVE TONGUE IS RATHER CHARMING, DONT LET THE3 WOULDBE LITERARY CRITICS (WHO AREN'T) DISCOURAGE YOU. |
| 2007-05-26 23:13:04 |
my classmate !!!
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It was very good for someone learning to speak and write english. A few parts were a bit hard to understand, but it was a good story. |
| 2006-07-21 10:22:01 |
My 1st Time With Her…..
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very good story , but just a little too fast , slow it down a bit with more sexual details , other than that was very good reading . |