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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-13 16:32:04 | my night of dog fucking | While I haven't submitted a story, I tried to be objective when I read one. I additionally try not to be too judgmental about grammar, but your story was a bit difficult to follow. This is meant to be constructive and in no way negative. I myself am a history major and fully understand how difficult it is to convey what happened in one's life, when it used to writing an expository form. That being said, please consider redoing your stories utilizing quotation marks and spacing the sentences so we can tell who's talking. |
| 2006-08-14 14:29:59 | my night of dog fucking | wtf are you that desperate ya qotta fuck a dog,,disgusting lmao |
| 2006-08-16 12:10:47 | my night of dog fucking | very good story and i would love to read more. i got very wet and could not resist cumming. i have nver been with a dog but i sure would love to have watched that. |
| 2006-08-18 05:22:50 | my night of dog fucking | Unreadable. You need quotation marks and each person needs a new line when they speak. If it's revised I'll give it anothe go otherwise it's hard to tell who is talking, what with no quotation marks. This isn't meant to bring you down, it's just a bit of advice |
| 2006-08-20 06:42:09 | my night of dog fucking | i feel bad for the dogs |