| 2006-07-25 15:05:37 |
Holly Loves Her Daddy Part 2
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sick, disgusting, and too obvious. your writing skills aren't top class, but i guess not everybody has it. |
| 2006-07-25 23:15:13 |
Holly Loves Her Daddy Part 2
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that guy is fucking sick |
| 2006-07-26 04:37:37 |
Holly Loves Her Daddy Part 2
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actually that kind of story happens too often in real life.That guy is sick! |
| 2006-07-27 17:21:22 |
Holly Loves Her Daddy Part 2
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I'm a little concerned about the reader who is getting his rocks off at this story . . . oh well, each to their own, I guess. This is a messed up tale, that's for sure, but i don't rate stories based on my own personal preferences. this one is haunting; therefore, in my humble opinion, good. 8/10 -- Ashley Barbie |
| 2006-07-27 19:57:50 |
Holly Loves Her Daddy Part 2
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To all who are "concerned" about this type of story.....maybe you should consider reading the themes listed BEFORE reading... I think this story is well written for the themes listed. I hope this story will turn into a series. |