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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-04 21:04:41 | Brittney's Secret lust | omg that was soooooooooo hott i am so turned on my dick is hard it would have been better if it was her friend tho |
| 2006-11-08 11:11:40 | Brittney's Secret lust | This story was o.k. but I do have some comments for you. For one your spelling sucks ass, so does mine but you need to take your time and reread and reread agian. Hell, pass it to a friend or another author and let them read it first. Another thing is you didnt give enough detail, TAKE MORE TIME and get more indepth and practice your spelling. And another thing, I hate to sound like an English teacher but put it in paragraph form. It alot easier to read when there are spaces in between the paragraphs. When you write the sequal (if you havent already) include the mom. Other than what I listed above you did a good job with length and creativity. Let me tell ya, I sure as hell got off to reading your story. |
| 2006-12-03 12:58:54 | Brittney's Secret lust | thay shit was good i think you should right another one it was awsome!!!! |
| 2006-12-06 16:56:37 | Brittney's Secret lust | i really like this u should do another one tnx for the entertainment |
| 2006-12-08 00:44:02 | Brittney's Secret lust | that written okay but you could have put more discriptive details in it |