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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-07-30 10:23:20 | Stranded - an island paradise? | lets have another one dude...nice concept |
2006-07-30 16:16:34 | Stranded - an island paradise? | this is nice but put the stories like you are roger man |
2006-07-30 18:57:03 | Stranded - an island paradise? | I don't want to be too harsh, because English obviously isn't your first language. The whole idea of an island full of women who just need this one lucky man is interesting, but it is poorly executed. The uncertainty of death isn't appealing to me. The idea that all of these women have the bodies of supermodels is preposterous. Gravity's a bitch, and perky breasts just don't last that long without support. Tiny bikini tops don't count. A sequel is fine, but try more story and less cliche like five sequential male orgasms. |
2006-07-31 23:59:36 | Stranded - an island paradise? | good story |
2006-08-01 03:12:27 | Stranded - an island paradise? | "When Jackson thinked that ...." When Jackson "thinked"? Where the fuck did you go to school, or did you go at all? What's with these illiterates trying to write stories. |