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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-01 20:25:19 | Losing it young | hey um thanx for the comments srry like i said this is the first time i wrote any thing oh and i was ten she was fourteen um the next time i write ill wor k more on the emotions thing and this was almost ten years ago but yeah ill work harder on the next one and maybe get someone to help me too keep the comments rolling and ill take them in to better my next story |
| 2006-08-02 00:39:53 | Losing it young | Alright I guess. Word of advice my friend as I have found it effective. Shave off some pounds and you might get some! Worked fir me. But also work on those emotions and add lots more detail. A boy in Babeland is a good example. Rain is too. The Allie and me series is also good and it has alot of emotion. All of them do actually. Use those to help you out. |
| 2006-08-02 01:13:44 | Losing it young | great story-first love is not easy to forget |
| 2006-08-07 23:25:56 | Losing it young | when you were ten?!? thats gross and weird on so many levels! |
| 2006-12-30 05:35:01 | Losing it young | Son, get your shit together, you went fron 10 to 14 in one sentennce annd fucked up the rest, keep trying maybe you'll make it. |