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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-11 13:43:44 | Live & Learn - (pt. 1) | t'was awsome man! |
| 2006-08-11 18:56:09 | Live & Learn - (pt. 1) | nice story |
| 2006-08-13 11:15:35 | Live & Learn - (pt. 1) | Well... I always try to give constructive criticism... The only thing (it's pretty big) is that you switched the names half way through... |
| 2006-08-13 15:58:25 | Live & Learn - (pt. 1) | re: comment below I didn't switch the names - part of the story is that the personality of the girl is not what the protagonist originally thought. The names are right. |
| 2006-08-14 01:00:09 | Live & Learn - (pt. 1) | 8/10 -- perhaps you tried too hard. try simplifying. the opening is verbose, as hard14u stated. you have a tremendous amount of talent, let it flow, let it flow . . . |