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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-08-02 21:05:03 | Wild Night of Passion | so many problems. first paragraph, you state "we" were getting ready. who? you and who? do you have multiple personalities? reads like you are a guy trying to write female. also, like you are describing a porno movie. 3/10 -- a point because you did write a story, a point because it was readable, and a point because it flows well. |
2006-08-02 22:05:01 | Wild Night of Passion | God that Kevin guy sounds sooo hot. I wish I was half as good looking as him and that cock Dear Lord. I wish I was that big. |
2006-08-02 23:46:32 | Wild Night of Passion | i would like to see more stories of the sort, but your real life adventures. |
2006-08-03 00:40:14 | Wild Night of Passion | It was alright, didn't even get me hard because was so short, but none the less alright 6/10 |
2006-08-02 12:49:55 | Teased by Sister in Law | great story-nice slow build up,then good sex.nice way you worked in the "every body coming-no body could stop-or want to line.more pleeeez! |